Another month, another 100 word story prompt. This month, Morgen Bailey invites us to write a children’s story (a story for or about children) for her April flash fiction competition. All rules can be found on the page I’ve linked too. You can enter up to three stories per month. Here is my first attempt:
Dinosaur Dreaming
Summer days were best. Just me and my younger brother running free. We played all kinds of games but cloud spotting was our favourite.
“Look, that one there” I pointed.
“Which one?” he excitedly replied.
“The one that looks like a dinosaur” I urged.
“Nah, it’s a Pterodactyl” he corrected.
Gleefully teasing him.
“That is a dinosaur. Silly!”
Shoot, the time; mum would be worried.
“Where you been at today, Becki?”
“Just cloud spotting with Joey.”
“Sweetheart. Joeys gone. 2 years now.”
“I know mummy, but he’s always with me. He would have loved cloud spotting. Remember, he loved dinosaurs.”
Beautiful, very moving ending 🙂
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Sisterly love, will live on forever 🙂
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Oh wow! was not expecting that ending. Wonderful job!!
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Thank you 🙂
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Great work yet again
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Thank you, I really do appreciate the feedback 🙂
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Loved the ending as well by the way
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🙂
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Your photo drew me in. And the story grabbed me and kept me. Bittersweet ending. Thank you. You delivered a true story.
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Thank you 🙂
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This was a lovely short story with a poignant twist and an uplifting ending. Lovely.
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I didn’t realize 100 words could almost make me cry! That was such a sweet story with a lovely though sad ending. Great job, truly.
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Thanks you x
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I nominate you for The Mystery Blogger Award
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The photo was beautiful and I loved the story ❤
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Thanks 🙂 x
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I agree with the previous commenters. It is a lovely and bittersweet story.
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Thank you 🙂
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Beautiful, my sister played with our late cousin for years! ♥️
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Ahh, bless her x
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Not an expected ending, great job! I understand the sisterly love and how it never goes away. Even when they are no longer here.
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Thank you 🙂
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